深海
That deep blue，It reflects the blue sky.The free fish，To swim slowly，No one to stop them.No matter whether he is on the surface of the ripple, and no matter he quietly shed the light of the sun，Go to the deep sea.??The water there is more cold, the air pressure is higher, the more black.Only a few fish live in where.But that is more quiet, no one disturb.??Dark, and lonely，That is the deep sea.
修改后：Looking through that deep blue，it reflects the blue sky. You can see the free fish swim slowly. No one stops them, no matter he is on the surface of the ripple, or he quietly shed the light of the sun. Go to the deep sea, ?the water there is much colder, and the pressure is much higher. Only a few fish can live where. Dark, quiet and lonely. That is the deep sea.
修改老师：Crystal 老师?
????五年级:曹静薇
深海
声明：除非特别标注，否则均为本站原创文章，转载时请以链接形式注明文章出处。如若本站内容侵犯了原著者的合法权益，可联系本站删除。