Spring is here
Spring is everywhere, as long as we feel.? ? ? ?Spring, green tree change. The grass is green and the flowers are open. There are red yellow powder flowers, scrambling to open. In the suburb, some children fly kites.? ? ? ?In the garden, there are a lot of flowers. But there is no tall tree. Some weeds, from the earth in their heads. Look at the wonderful world, secretly happy.? ? ? ?Spring is wonderful.?I like spring.
修改后：Spring is everywhere. In spring, trees and grass begin to turn green. The flowers start to bloom.?In the suburb, some children fly kites. ?In the garden, there are a lot of beautiful and colorful flowers. Spring is wonderful.?I like spring.
修改老师：Crystal 老师?
????初一:思灵
Spring is here
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