My school
Look,this is my school .? ? ? There are many cute chirdren.I go to shool every day.There are has Math class、English class and Chinese class。? ? ? Our teacher is very kind.They'll play games with us。The people here have a very, very like him。? ? ??Also，In our school the stage stood a large camphor tree，Its great，He stood there，Like the green guard that protects us。? ? ??In our school there are gardens, teaching buildings and other buildings.? ? ??Our school is really too wonderful for words。? ? ??Do you know our school's name？Let me tell you！Its name is the first primary school in Xingan County!
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?? Look, this is my school.? There are many cute chirdren. I go to shool every day. I have math, English and Chinese class in my school.? Our teachers are very kind. They always?play games with us. The students like them very much.??
? Our school is very big. There are gardens,?teaching buildings and?other buildings.?There is?a large camphor tree in our school. It is like?a?green guard that protects us.?Our school is really?beautiful.??????
? Do you know our school's name？Let me tell you！Its name is NO. 1 primary school in Xingan County!
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My school
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