Dreams make me change
? I used to have many dreams. As I grow up, I?still have?so many dreams. Every dream makes me change.
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? When I was six years old, I dreamed to be a student. This dream made me change a lot. I studied hard and I did more homework to be a student.
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? But when I?became?a student, I wanted to be a writer because I love writing?so much.?Being a writer?means more and more people will read?my?passages and?I?can share?my?ideas with everyone. Well, it also?makes?you keep calm and?help me become wiser.
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? Now, I?am dreaming?to be a kid because I want to stay with my parents more often. Maybe this dream is very strange. But when I grow up, I find?I?have lost?lots of amazing feelings ofbeing a kid. I?am dreaming?to be a kid. It means I can play with parents and?spend more with them. This dream makes me change. I think I must study hard to make my parents not work so hard. They?have done?a lot for?me and my sister.??I hope to?become a kid again and stay with my parents more time. The dream makes me know?the?hardships?of my parents. And I?have changed?because of?this?dream.
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? I used to have many dreams. As I grow up, my dreams change a lot.
? Before I went to school, I dreamed?of becoming a student.? But when I?became?a student, I wanted to be a writer because I love writing?so much.?Being a writer?means more and more people will read?my?passages and?I?can share?my?ideas with everyone. Well, it can also?help me become wiser.
? Now, I?am dreaming?of becoming a kid. Maybe this dream is very strange. But?as I grow up, I find?I?have lost?lots of amazing feelings of being a kid.?If I were a little kid again, I could play with parents and?spend more with them.
? This dream makes me change, too. I think I must study hard to make my parents not to work so hard. They?have done?too much for?me and my sister.
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Dreams make me change
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