Hug in spring

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Here?comes?spring.

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The?world?comes?to?itself.

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I?took?my?luggage?and?had?an?extemporaneous?travel?last?Sunday.

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Firstly,?I?went?camping?in?a?mountain?near?my?hometown.?Air?in?that?mountain?is?fresher?than?that?in?city?which?smells?a?little?disgusting.Here?I?had?a?big?lunch?which?contained?various?foods?such?as?fish,?chicken,?mutton?and?so?on.When?we?were?having?lunch,?birds?kept?company?with?us.They?sang?attractive?songs?which?made?us?unbuttoned.

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In?modern?city?life,?we?are?always?worried?about?our?personal?affairs,?and?hardly?have?time?to?relax?ourselves.?So,?I?made?best?of?this?enjoyable?time?to?enjoy?my?life.

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Secondly,?I?went?to?fishing?on?a?boat?with?my?father?in?a?river?where?trees?stand.?Flowers?were?singing,?birds?were?singing,?even?fish?were?singing.?Spring?is?a?magic?season.?It?can?give?people?hope?and?energy?to?struggle?for?our?goals.

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As?a?will-graduated?student,?I?learned?a?lot?from?this?trip.

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As?I?said,?spring?is?a?season?which?is?full?of?power?and?magic.?Everything?is?changing.?Nothing?is?impossible.?Spring?starts?lives?and?put?hope?in?our?mind.?Hard?and?boring?though?College?entrance?examination?is,?I?will?encourage?myself?to?struggle?to?the?end,?just?as?cockroaches.

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Fighting!

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The spring is coming; and the weather becomes warmer and warmer. Last?Sunday, I went outing with my parents.

First,?we?went?camping?in?a?mountain?near?my?hometown.?Air?in?that?mountain?is?much fresher?than?that?in?the city. There?we?had?a?big?lunch?which?contained?various?foods?such?as?fish,?chicken,?mutton?and?so?on.? When?we were?having?lunch,?birds?kept?flying around?us. They?sang songs?which?made?us happier. At that moment, my father said, “In?modern?city?life,?we?are?always?worried?about?our?personal?affairs,?and?hardly?have?time?to?relax ? ourselves.??So,?let’s make?best?use of?this?enjoyable?time?to?enjoy?ourselves.” Then,?I?went?fishing?on?a?boat?with?my?father?in?a?river?where?trees?stand.?Birds?were?singing,?even?fish?are?singing.?

Spring?is?really a?magic?season.?It?can?give?people?hope?and?energy?to?struggle?for?their goals. Spring?starts?lives?and?puts hope?in?our?mind.?Hard?and?boring?though?college?entrance?examination?is,?I?will?encourage?myself?to?struggle?to?the?end.??

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