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THE ONLY MAGICAL THING----Map? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?There was only one thing in the world that wanted to play, and that guy’s name was Jack. He wanted to be a pirate one day, and found treasure in pirate islands… He had a conversation with his mother one day for certain. It was about being a pirate one day for once in his lifetime…

? “Mom, I want to be a pirate one day, and find treasures in buried islands and…” “Whoa! Hold there son, what do you mean by, you what to be a pirate?” asked his mother, “Well it is that I just want to hunt for treasure instead of just being a regular boy like usual…”

? His mother laughed so very hard, “Then why don’t you ask the sorcerer of the wicked castle?” his mother suddenly added, “What do you mean of: Wicked?” “Well,” replied her mother, “It all happened in…” “Wait!” shouted Jack, “There is no time for you to explain the whole thing, if you could show me this ‘Wicked castle’ then I could be a pirate sooner or later.

? And so his mother showed him a riddle clue, which had many words written on it, “All you have to do is answer the riddles and you will arrive at your destination;” so Jack took the map, and head out for the wicked castle immediately, “Now let us see, two choices to make; which one is it that I need to take?” then he suddenly felt a little twinkle among his eyes, he looked at the map; “That’s it!” he opened the map and placed it upon him. “Now, I just need to figure this one out.”

? He read it out loud, “Choose the path that has round hard things the most…” then he thought about it, he looked at each side; first, he checked the left; “There is nothing very hard on this side, or even round!” the he checked the other side, known as the right; “Look, there is a pile of rocks here, they are very hard; and round, and there are plenty of them!”

??He walked to the right, and then he went straight on. At last he came to a big castle, it has many traps; and so Jack decided to use the map and find clues so that he won’t get lost…

? He first came to the front door, and then he opened the map, read the riddle; “Watch out for the monster, with two pairs of wings; and come in the spring, it is giant, I warn you…” then he answered, “The only flying thing that has two pairs of wings is a dragon fly!” when he said “Dragonfly” d-r-a-g-o-n-f-l-y; a giant dragonfly flew past his eyes!

? “Whoa!” shouted Jack, he then read the riddle, “look around you; use the one, as sharp as a knife;” Jack looked around himself, then he found a big sharp needle; it was huge! He used all his might and picked it up, and then he sprang it to the monster. The monster fell down immediately, as if dead.

? Then Jack had beaten the giant ‘Dragonfly’d-r-a-g-o-n-f-l-y, he was ready to see the sorcerer. He was casting a spell when Jack came in, he interrupted him; and so the sorcerer shouted, “What are you doing stranger?” he asked, “Can you make me a pirate?” “What! Nobody has ever done that spell before; never!”

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? And so Jack had to keep on being a normal boy, he was satisfied sometimes, but also was glad that he didn’t turn into a pirate. “The map is ‘the only magical thing’ in this world…

修改后?THE ONLY MAGICAL THING----Map? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?There was only one thing in the world that wanted to play, and that guy’s name was Jack. He wanted to be a pirate one day, and found treasure in pirate islands… He had a conversation with his mother one day for certain. It was about being a pirate one day for once in his lifetime…

? “Mom, I want to be a pirate one day, and find treasures in buried islands and…” “Whoa! Hold there son, what you mean by you what to be a pirate?” asked his mother, “Well it is that I just want to hunt for treasure instead of just being a regular boy like usual…”

? His mother laughed so very hard, “Then why don’t you ask the sorcerer of the wicked castle?” his mother suddenly added, “What do you mean of: Wicked?” “Well,” replied her mother, “It all happened in…” “Wait!” shouted Jack, “There is no time for you to explain the whole thing, if you could show me this ‘Wicked castle’ then I could be a pirate sooner or later.

? And so his mother showed him a riddle clue, which had many words written on it, “All you have to do is to answer the riddles and you will arrive at your destination;” so Jack took the map, and head out for the wicked castle immediately, “Now let us see, two choices to make; which one is it that I need to take?” then he suddenly felt a little twinkle among his eyes, he looked at the map; “That’s it!” he opened the map and placed it upon him. “Now, I just need to figure this one out.”

? He read it out loud, “Choose the path that has round hard things the most…” then he thought about it, he looked at each side; first, he checked the left; “There is nothing very hard on this side, or even round!” the he checked the other side, known as the right; “Look, there is a pile of rocks here, they are very hard; and round, and there are plenty of them!”

??He walked to the right, and then he went straight on. At last he came to a big castle, it has many traps; and so Jack decided to use the map and find clues so that he won’t get lost…

? He first came to the front door, and then he opened the map, read the riddle; “Watch out for the monster, with two pairs of wings; and come in the spring, it is giant, I warn you…” then he answered, “The only flying thing that has two pairs of wings is a dragon fly!” when he said “Dragonfly” d-r-a-g-o-n-f-l-y; a giant dragonfly flew past his eyes!

? “Whoa!” shouted Jack, he then read the riddle, “look around you; use the one, as sharp as a knife;” Jack looked around himself, then he found a big sharp needle; it was huge! He used all his strength and picked it up, and then he sprang it to the monster. The monster fell down immediately, as if dead.

? Then Jack had beaten the giant ‘Dragonfly’. He was ready to see the sorcerer. He was casting a spell when Jack came in, he interrupted him; and so the sorcerer shouted, “What are you doing stranger?” he asked, “Can you make me a pirate?” “What! Nobody has ever done that spell before; never!”

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? And so Jack had to keep on being a normal boy, he was satisfied sometimes, but also was glad that he didn’t turn into a pirate. “The map is ‘the only magical thing’ in this world…

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