Travel？I have my own style

In class,teacher asks our will conduct a travelling. It has two ways to the travelling,concluding travel with a group,travel alone,we could discussing a way how to arrange . ten minutes later,the result is us choice travel with a group ,because this is convenient , most person of us consider is good. For example,we have a guide to make us have not losing,Part from,we will have a lot of time to enjoyment,rather than going to look for a hotel,It will have a good time enough,what's more,we will have opportunity to make new friends ,helping each othe. Of course ,onthers of us think travel alone is better than travel with a group,they rather than like quite a quiet ,because this way silent enough,they rather than become a listener of nature,and they think more importance is fredom,free time,free choice place of travel,free care for own,all in all,the ways both all well,haha,have a good time.

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In class, the teacher tells us that we will?go travelling. We have two choices to travel: travel?in a group or travel alone.?After discussing for?ten minutes,?we decide to travel in?a group, because this is convenient. The guide can keep us together and we won't get lost. Apart from that, we will have a lot of time to enjoy ourselves rather than going to look for a hotel. What's more,we will have opportunities to make new friends ,helping each other. However,?the others?think travelling alone is better. They can have a quieter time and?be a listener of the nature.?They think?the most?important thing?is freedom. They can make their own plans freely.

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