spring

Jasper makeup into a tree falling 10000 green silk sash.spring.A word that contains life,at this time.?bouquets of flowers and piles of brocades?.Give a person a kind of good feeling?。 ? ? ? ? ? ??Spring?is?the?starter?for?a?year?as?dawn?is?for?a?day.Yeah！Spring morning breathe fresh air?,Looking at the beautiful scenery outside the window .all let peopie?become enlightened at once，refreshed?. ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ??Every spring .Roadside wild flowers?,Rose in the yard?，Peony in the field?...all?Stood in full bloom?. ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? I like spring.Like the eagle cannot do without the sky?. I?ardently love spring.Like a child's love for his mother's arms.I?Often think of spring can come earlier .merely?A little impossible. ? ? ??Oho！spring.How beautiful you are.Let me think of you all the time?.Let me look forward to you every moment?. ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? spring!A colorful season?.

修改后：Spring is a word that contains life.?? ? ? ? Spring?is?the?start?for?a?year?as?dawn?is?for?a?day. In spring morning, I can breathe the fresh air. And then I look?at the beautiful scenery outside the window which refresh me?at once. ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Every spring,?flowers along the roadside,?roses in the yard,?peony in the field and all the flowers are?standing in full bloom. What a colorful season! ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? I like spring, like a child's love for his mother's arms. How beautiful spring is. Let me hug you in my arms.? ? ?

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